Fishy Pond!

Friday, March 11, 2011

First Cats

Whirl looked around. A moon had passed, yet no one had stumbled upon them. Star and Spark needed to become to-be's, but there was nobody to train them."Dad! Dad- er, Whirl!" Spark skidded into the cave. Whirl stood up."What is it?" Spark caught his breath."There is a group of cats outside! They look so hungry and lost." Whirl smiled with excitement."Well then, bring them on in!" He purred. Soon, Spark and Star returned in with four cats behind them.

"Welcome." He smiled to the cats. A ginger she-cat stepped boldly forward."Where are we?" She demanded. Whirl chuckled."Well, my friend, you now see the remains of the Tribe of Whispers. We are rebuilding ourselves. Would you like to join?" The cats looked at each other nervously."Well, I suppose." A black she-cat slowly said after a while."We have no where else to go." Whirl nodded with pleasure.

He thought for a moment, then looked at the ginger she-cat."You seem like an ideal General, what's your name?" The she-cat looked down."I don't have one. We......we forgot our names." Whirl frowned."That's okay, I can give you all new names." He leaped onto the ledge he loved the best."You, your name shall be Amber that glows in the darkest cave. But you may go by Amber." The ginger she-cat nodded."I want you to be my general, second in command." He smiled, and the she-cat sat below him.

"You can be Moon that shines from above." He smiled at the she-cat, and thought he heard the slightest giggle. Probably just my imagination. He thought when the she-cat sat boldly."You can go by Moon. And you seem well built, you can be a CaveGuard." Moon nodded as Whirl moved on to the next cat. The she-cat spoke first."Actually, my name is Fern." She smiled lightly, and Whirl nodded."You may keep that, but you need a full name. How about Fern that sways in the breeze?" Fern nodded eagerly.

"Okay." Whirl studied the she-cats slender body."You will be a Hunter." The she-cat purred."Good! I'm great at hunting!" She sat down, and a smaller brown tom stood up."You remind me of a Hawk." Whirl smiled at the tom."Your name shall be Hawk the soars from above. You will be a To-be." Whirl then looked to his kits."It's time you became To-be's too." Star and Spark gasped with excitement and ran forward."Star, you will train as a Hunter, and be mentored by Fern." Star nodded and went to sit by Fern.

Spark jumped up."Spark, you will train as a CaveGuard, your mentor will be Moon." Spark sat by Moon and touched noses."Hawk, you will train as a CaveGuard from me." Hawk nodded and scrambled up to the ledge."I suppose that is all, let's get to work!"

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Amber{Sharpstone} said...

Amber smiled gratefully at Whirl.
~Amber

"We will train shortly after you eat and rest" Moon smiled.
~Moon

Fern nudged Star. "We will train after you eat some prey and take a break"
~Fern

Hawk stood by himself in the corner of camp.
~Hawk

☜♡☞☼cнιℓєpαη∂α☜♡☞☼ said...

Whirl smiled back to Amber."Do you know the basic's of being a General?"

Spark nodded and quickly pulled out some prey to eat.

Star smiled at her mentor, then saw it was her chance. She went over to Hawk, purring."Hi," She smiled in a flattering voice.

Amber{Sharpstone} said...

"Make patrols" Amber meowed. "Basically second in command as what you said a while ago" Amber smiled lightly.
~Amber

Hawk went from looking at the sky, to looking at STar. "Hello Star" He smiled.
~Hawk

☜♡☞☼cнιℓєpαη∂α☜♡☞☼ said...

Whirl nodded."That's good." He purred, but sadly the longing for Shine returned to his mind.

Star purred."Why are you sitting here all alone?"

Amber{Sharpstone} said...

"Whirl? Are you alright?" Amber cocked her head to one side.
~Amber

"I don't really know anyone" Hawk sighed, and he looked back at the trees.
~Hawk

☜♡☞☼cнιℓєpαη∂α☜♡☞☼ said...

Star laughed."Well, you have to get to know people!" She smiled and nudged him playfully.

Whirl felt tears brimming, but pulled them back. He wouldn't show weakness."Yes, I'm fine." He said, not letting his voice crack.

Amber{Sharpstone} said...

"Positive?" Amber meowed, and slightly narrowed her eyes. She stood a bit tall.
~Amber

"I prefer to not" Hawk sighed, his eyes dropped. He never once really had friends, nor older cats had a petpive of him.
~Hawk

☜♡☞☼cнιℓєpαη∂α☜♡☞☼ said...

"I could be your friend you know." Star smiled sweetly.

Whirl nodded."Yes, I'm sure." He padded bdack up to a ledge.

Amber{Sharpstone} said...

Amber nodded, I guess he was fine. Right? She trotted to the camp clearing, sat down, and started grooming her fur.
~Amber

Hawk looked up at her. "You sure that you won't regret it?"
~Hawk

☜♡☞☼cнιℓєpαη∂α☜♡☞☼ said...

"Of course I wouldn't! Why would I?" She became slowly confused.

Amber{Sharpstone} said...

"Nothing" Hawk muttered under his breath.
~Hawk